I have written a report which I will include in this, I will also include the feedback I have gotten from this report. I need an improvement on the report I am sending. A massive amount of additional writing is not needed but improvements in my report, including rewording, additional content, and anything else you reckon would improve this report would be very helpful. I will also be adding the data set this information was based off also. Also, remove all the irrelevant aspects as well. The screenshots are the feedback, group 1 data is the data set and practical methods is the original essay.