I have written a report which I will include in this, I will also include the feedback I have gotten from this report. I need an improvement on the report I am sending. A massive amount of additional writing is not needed but improvements in my report, including rewording, additional content, and anything else you reckon would improve this report would be very helpful. I will also be adding the data set this information was based off also. Also remove all the irrelevant aspects as well as incorrect tables or calculations. The practical methods 1 is the report that needs to be altered and improved, at the end of the document is the original feedback for the report and all the other photos and files are the relevant data sets, if you have any questions please feel free to contact me.